Poem For “Ethel”–Fake Name–UBH: Interlude November 10, 2022 by LAMarcom 7 Black Hair Black Eyes Bright Smile Great Thighs Wily Words From Her Mouth Gave No Pause Left No Doubt Words Delivered With Such Charm Better Watch Out You’ll Be Disarmed Your Walls Came Crashing Down Your Weapons On The Ground She Was Standing There (Laughing At My Folly) Laughing Everywhere You May As Well Surrender Right There Taking Me Aside, She Said “I’ll Never Be Your Bride. “But You Knew This All Along.” She Left Me With A Song And Made Me Smile Again Then Left Me With a Fact: “I Cheats At Blackjack” (Inside Joke—Will Elaborate On This In A Future Post As We Delve Deeper Into This Odyssey) “A Broad River Divides My Lovers: As Unchangeable As Nature.” Best Carly Song Ever NOT Written by Kris Kristofferson. I misspoke. Here is the one I meant (Written by Kris): Share this:FacebookTwitterRedditMoreTumblrPrintPocketLinkedInEmailLike this:Like Loading...
‘Poe-like” Indeed. I loved Poe.
and Victor Hugo
Thank You For your very kind and generous comment.
I really enjoyed this piece the prose and the music. The style was Poe like. The mixing of Media. If Poe had only the internet what a macabre web he would have spun. You have a gift for weaving Media. Bravo
Did not realize there was a hook; Just how I write.
I will get back to this story soon. Thank you for reading. And commenting.
“She cheats at blackjack”
I like the hook of the last line here Lance!